Silence

[clairethaoduong]

First thing to say is "Congratulations!!!". Great poem with the subtle juxtaposition between the title and the intensive use of onomatopeia! I personally really like the rhythm of the poem, especially "tickless", because it means "stationery" but at the same time conveys great resonance Not to mention brilliant consonance throughout the poem. I opine that maybe an endstop after the title ("Silence.") would be a great idea! but yeah, great poem to read