Red lace
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Thank you! The top poem is the most recent revision. Still a work in progress, I'll keep your suggestions in mind.Smile
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.
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Red lace - by Merrikay - 06-14-2015, 03:47 PM
RE: Red lace - by Magpie - 06-15-2015, 03:54 AM
RE: Red lace - by Merrikay - 06-15-2015, 04:40 AM
RE: Red lace - by Magpie - 06-15-2015, 06:33 AM
RE: Red lace - by Merrikay - 06-15-2015, 07:28 AM
RE: Red lace - by billy - 06-15-2015, 09:37 AM
RE: Red lace - by Merrikay - 06-15-2015, 10:04 AM
RE: Red lace - by Wjames - 06-30-2015, 01:49 PM
RE: Red lace - by Mark A Becker - 07-01-2015, 05:17 AM
RE: Red lace - by alsayn - 07-04-2015, 06:37 PM
RE: Red lace - by Merrikay - 07-08-2015, 03:12 AM



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