Untitled Insanity

Untitled Insanity

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07-08-2015, 03:06 AM

Thank you for the critique! Smile

I will definitly be working on the punctuation, the whole thing will probably be getting a rewrite. I'll be coming back to this one though, the subject matter is an interesting one. Welcome to the site!

I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.

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Untitled Insanity - by Merrikay - 06-13-2015, 01:26 PM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by DivineMsEmm - 06-13-2015, 04:21 PM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by poppoetry - 06-13-2015, 10:48 PM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by Merrikay - 06-14-2015, 02:29 AM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by DivineMsEmm - 06-16-2015, 09:11 AM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by billy - 06-16-2015, 12:48 PM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 01:02 PM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by clairethaoduong - 07-06-2015, 06:47 AM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by tectak - 07-19-2015, 07:36 AM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by Merrikay - 07-08-2015, 03:06 AM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by Quixilated - 07-15-2015, 04:20 AM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by Merrikay - 07-18-2015, 07:59 AM

RE: Untitled Insanity - by yilmazp90 - 07-22-2015, 08:25 AM

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