The Death Caps Grow

The Death Caps Grow

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07-05-2015, 11:17 AM

How is 'grime' and 'times' forced? Is it too elementary of a rhyme or does it make the overall meaning of the lines more confusing?
Also, thank you very much for the critique. Again, I appreciate it. Smile

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The Death Caps Grow - by Zeno's Bullet - 07-04-2015, 11:54 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by tectak - 07-04-2015, 05:20 PM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by Zeno's Bullet - 07-04-2015, 07:02 PM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by tectak - 07-05-2015, 09:09 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by Zeno's Bullet - 07-05-2015, 09:46 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by tectak - 07-06-2015, 05:21 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by Mark A Becker - 07-05-2015, 09:49 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by Zeno's Bullet - 07-05-2015, 10:11 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by Mark A Becker - 07-05-2015, 11:08 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by Zeno's Bullet - 07-05-2015, 11:17 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by Mark A Becker - 07-06-2015, 06:07 AM

RE: The Death Caps Grow - by NobodyNothing - 07-05-2015, 01:27 PM

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