Familiarity

[clairethaoduong]

I think that "crying over spilled milk" is somehow redundant and it seems to be a cliche for me. And the "Oh wells" is ofcourse a grammar mistake; to me, it doesn't fit in the poem at all as it strikes me as an indifferent attitude, not to mention a bit informal. Additionally, "Because" before "this is my world" makes the statement a bit weak. I think it's a better idea to leave out "because" and add an exclaimation mark after it for a sense of determination. But overall, great poem and keep writing more