Dueling Narwhals

[ChristopherSea]

Very cool Christopher.

I didn't know what a "narwhal" was until I looked it up.  Normally I'd say that it's a lot to ask of a reader before he starts to read the poem, but since this is a short piece, it seemed appropriate.  

Now that I know that they have tusks, I can easily envision the narwhal as a unicorn. A sea unicorn, in fact.

I think that the "punctuation art" is an interesting idea. It may be able to stand alone as the first poem that I'd ever read with a title, but no words.  A concrete poem all its own.  

The "s" sounds work well here.

Three short lines (+ the keystroke artwork), and I learned something.  

Thanks,
... Mark

Thank you Mark A.B. for sharing your time and reactions. I was afraid the 'illustration' would be seen as chicken-scratch.