< hovering above my garden >
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(06-22-2015, 11:40 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:       hovering above my garden
    ufo? -  
    poppy
Nice one Ray, I see it a couple of different ways - The straight forward visual sense that the poppy looks like a flying saucer of sorts. I can also see it in the way that 'poppy' is not the answer to the question but more the reason why the question is being asked, in fact it could even be the narrator who is hovering over the garden and the poppy is the reason that they got so 'high', in this sense then the 'ufo' would be meant in its true sense of 'unidentified flying object' as opposed to a flying saucer that is usually associated with the term.
The question mark and dash close together seem awkward but that's purely from an aesthetic visual point of view.
Nice image, cheers for the read,

Mark
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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< hovering above my garden > - by rayheinrich - 06-22-2015, 11:40 PM
RE: < hovering above my garden > - by milo - 06-24-2015, 04:20 AM
RE: < hovering above my garden > - by rayheinrich - 06-25-2015, 01:19 PM
RE: < hovering above my garden > - by Magpie - 06-24-2015, 04:57 PM



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