06-24-2015, 09:45 AM
Just a note on the ongoing debate on "prima". There was a dance reference in the poem, my mind immediately jumped to "prima ballerina". I think most people with some familiarity would be able to deduce it.
The "past, present future" doesn't work at all for me, it is a little boring. Lives as a dance, either eternal or otherwise, is certainly well trod territory as well.
The "past, present future" doesn't work at all for me, it is a little boring. Lives as a dance, either eternal or otherwise, is certainly well trod territory as well.

