06-24-2015, 08:50 AM
Revelation again,
I usually don't comment on comments, but I appreciate what mercedes said. I, too, find it interesting that I can move the line breaks around to achieve different effects. That is one sign of a well crafted piece.
I don't think it's possible to do that with longer poems. And that's another reason I'm such a big fan of the short forms: they almost always show me more, with less.
... Mark
I usually don't comment on comments, but I appreciate what mercedes said. I, too, find it interesting that I can move the line breaks around to achieve different effects. That is one sign of a well crafted piece.
I don't think it's possible to do that with longer poems. And that's another reason I'm such a big fan of the short forms: they almost always show me more, with less.
... Mark