06-24-2015, 04:58 AM
Hello rayheinrich-
I'll admit that I had no idea what this poem was about until I saw a picture of one of these...
Pretty simple leap, then, from UFO to poppy. Still, it takes an alien mind to make that leap. Your mind or mine? Take your pick...
I'd suggest indenting L.1 & L.3, and leaving L.2 (ufo?) butted against the left margin. And I'd drop the "-" because you already have a "?" after "ufo".
Thanks,
... Mark
I'll admit that I had no idea what this poem was about until I saw a picture of one of these...
Pretty simple leap, then, from UFO to poppy. Still, it takes an alien mind to make that leap. Your mind or mine? Take your pick...
I'd suggest indenting L.1 & L.3, and leaving L.2 (ufo?) butted against the left margin. And I'd drop the "-" because you already have a "?" after "ufo".
Thanks,
... Mark