22-06-15
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Mark, Good use of the 'moon' as both a guide and distraction. I really like the line break after 'myself,'
the word play that you make with 'find myself/lost' is superb.

No suggestions, but I had to admire the work./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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22-06-15 - by Magpie - 06-22-2015, 09:09 PM
RE: 22-06-15 - by ChristopherSea - 06-22-2015, 09:22 PM
RE: 22-06-15 - by rayheinrich - 06-22-2015, 11:33 PM
RE: 22-06-15 - by Mark A Becker - 06-24-2015, 04:32 AM
RE: 22-06-15 - by rayheinrich - 06-24-2015, 05:48 AM
RE: 22-06-15 - by just mercedes - 06-24-2015, 07:22 AM
RE: 22-06-15 - by Mark A Becker - 06-24-2015, 08:50 AM
RE: 22-06-15 - by Magpie - 06-24-2015, 05:19 PM
RE: 22-06-15 - by rayheinrich - 06-25-2015, 01:03 PM



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