Equilibrium (originally "Gravity")
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Thanks Mark. Made some changes. First problem was the title. Probably should have been "balance", but I felt the piece was too short to use it in the title and the body. I'm not 100% convinced it would sound as much like a riddle had we not had the riddle thread active so recently. I understand it's a little tough to piece together - the speaker is not at his best.  Confused
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RE: Gravity - by Magpie - 06-16-2015, 08:59 AM
RE: Gravity - by FindingJune - 06-16-2015, 09:48 AM
RE: Gravity - by Tiger the Lion - 06-17-2015, 01:03 AM
RE: Gravity - by billy - 06-17-2015, 05:30 PM
RE: Gravity - by Magpie - 06-17-2015, 09:38 PM
RE: Equilibrium (originally "Gravity") - by Tiger the Lion - 06-18-2015, 12:40 AM
RE: Equilibrium (originally "Gravity") - by milo - 06-18-2015, 06:21 AM



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