haiku attempt

[Merrikay]

Thank you grace!

Thanks billy, I'll be thinking on it!

Ambrosial, thank you! Your description, of one breath, and a aha, along with everyone else's advice is starting to build a picture of what it should look like for me. I actually wasn't meanjng to capitalize, I'm writing from my phone, but I see there is importance in those details too now. I'll take more care in the future.