06-16-2015, 11:47 PM
(06-16-2015, 11:45 PM)queenconstantine Wrote: @miloI been known to count the 5 accents on mine.
Thanks for the advice, duly noted.
@ellejam
Thank you!yep, I let it flop there..I think I'll edit it, and implement milos advice, and repost. (In the same thread this time!)
I'm not sure how this worked, but I was counting to ten on my fingers with each line...
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