06-16-2015, 11:45 PM
@milo
Thanks for the advice, duly noted.
@ellejam
Thank you!
yep, I let it flop there..I think I'll edit it, and implement milos advice, and repost. (In the same thread this time!)
I'm not sure how this worked, but I was counting to ten on my fingers with each line...
Thanks for the advice, duly noted.
@ellejam
Thank you!
yep, I let it flop there..I think I'll edit it, and implement milos advice, and repost. (In the same thread this time!)I'm not sure how this worked, but I was counting to ten on my fingers with each line...
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.