06-16-2015, 11:19 PM
(06-16-2015, 09:22 PM)queenconstantine Wrote: I was trying iambic pentameter, pretty sure it's all wrong, but a fun attempt, nonetheless."ReGRETtabLY" is lovely, I'll have to use it the next time my narrator regrets something, although I'm not sure that ever happens. PITeously or PITeousLY, still wrong. Great start, I even enjoyed the content.
The sun shines bright upon my window sill,
A spider most pretentiously does crawl,
My mind now screams a spider I must kill!
I grab a nearby lamp intent to maul...
Regrettably my plan now goes astray,
The lamp cord lay in wait across the rug,
I thought I had the spider beat this day,
Piteously, I can only shout Damn Bug!!
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