An atrocity
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(06-16-2015, 09:06 AM)queenconstantine Wrote:  The title is quite obviously, not tongue in cheek.?
Hope it's okay too post, I got bored.

Bright pink elephants never die,
Such a shame I'm not that shy.
Travesty is a travesty does,
I swear my mom is not my cuz!
Nonsense thoughts flail and putter,
Saran Wrap shirts, oops,
Slipped in the gutter.
I swear I'm really not that dense,
My poetry just doesn't make sense!
reads like atrain of thought poem. no feedback persay apart fro [a] should be [as]
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An atrocity - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 09:06 AM
RE: An atrocity - by Magpie - 06-16-2015, 09:36 AM
RE: An atrocity - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 09:45 AM
RE: An atrocity - by billy - 06-16-2015, 12:40 PM
RE: An atrocity - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 12:47 PM



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