Equilibrium (originally "Gravity")
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I have to agree with Mark. These two aren't working together for me. I am really fond of the second stanza.
"Bees do have a smell, you know, and if they don't they should, for their feet are dusted with spices from a million flowers." -Bradbury
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RE: Gravity - by Magpie - 06-16-2015, 08:59 AM
RE: Gravity - by FindingJune - 06-16-2015, 09:48 AM
RE: Gravity - by Tiger the Lion - 06-17-2015, 01:03 AM
RE: Gravity - by billy - 06-17-2015, 05:30 PM
RE: Gravity - by Magpie - 06-17-2015, 09:38 PM
RE: Equilibrium (originally "Gravity") - by milo - 06-18-2015, 06:21 AM



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