Oh How I Missed You

[Magpie]

You'll never know how I missed you,
my aim was off I hit your hat.
You'll never know how I missed you,
my next shot made certain of that.

Love it, if you don't want a comma after "off" for simplicity's sake you might need to reword. Thanks for the read, just what I needed.

I've put the comma in for the moment, but I think it would be better without so you're right I'll need to reword it slightly. I'll have a think on it.
I fully expected the title to stop most people coming to read so it's good to know that you had faith in me. 

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it,

Mark