06-15-2015, 10:31 PM
There are various synonyms which you could use instead of hollow / hollowing: ones along the lines of vacant, void, empty, and so on.
As to having to -ing words in one line, that really is just a stylistic choice. There is no reason why you could not have an entire poem of them. Some of the Algonquin languages, I believe, use 'doing' words a lot more than nouns.
As to having to -ing words in one line, that really is just a stylistic choice. There is no reason why you could not have an entire poem of them. Some of the Algonquin languages, I believe, use 'doing' words a lot more than nouns.