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Red lace
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06-15-2015, 10:04 AM
Lmao, okay defiantly not a pilot, I get what you're saying, a lot of the unnecessary stuff like "mistake" was my trying to make it flow/rhyme. I see how it actually detracts now though... Grr, poetry is tough! I'm not giving up though, it's definitly worth the work...
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.
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RE: Red lace - by Magpie - 06-15-2015, 03:54 AM
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RE: Red lace - by Magpie - 06-15-2015, 06:33 AM
RE: Red lace - by Merrikay - 06-15-2015, 07:28 AM
RE: Red lace - by billy - 06-15-2015, 09:37 AM
RE: Red lace - by Merrikay - 06-15-2015, 10:04 AM
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RE: Red lace - by Mark A Becker - 07-01-2015, 05:17 AM
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