06-14-2015, 03:47 PM
I know there's a lot of work to be done, but I hope it's improving, I'm having trouble with how to wrap up an ending...
A tiara shatters on concrete,
Finally I see past Mercedes mask.
Fine merlot, expensive cologne drown me
I saw the red lipstick on white collar too late.
I gave you my pearls, you broke the string
all I had left in this world
Red lace peeks from under your bed,
Multiple handprints splatter your door.
This is me trying to stay away from the abstract images..
Crystal sky shatters above me,
I finally see past your gentleman's mask.
Fine wine, and expensive cologne drown me,
Thank god I saw the monster at last.
I didn't see the tissues stained red,
Until it was too late,
I gave you all, you gave me none,
That was my mistake
how did I miss the lacy thong on the floor,
The dirty handprints adorning the door.
They warned me of you, I was such a fool,
This is the price I pay.
A tiara shatters on concrete,
Finally I see past Mercedes mask.
Fine merlot, expensive cologne drown me
I saw the red lipstick on white collar too late.
I gave you my pearls, you broke the string
all I had left in this world
Red lace peeks from under your bed,
Multiple handprints splatter your door.
This is me trying to stay away from the abstract images..
Crystal sky shatters above me,
I finally see past your gentleman's mask.
Fine wine, and expensive cologne drown me,
Thank god I saw the monster at last.
I didn't see the tissues stained red,
Until it was too late,
I gave you all, you gave me none,
That was my mistake
how did I miss the lacy thong on the floor,
The dirty handprints adorning the door.
They warned me of you, I was such a fool,
This is the price I pay.
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.