My First Time
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Smile

*innards

To fix your meter in the first stanza, I'd suggest a quick bit of surgery:

My first time at this kinda doc
has made me kinda nervous.
(Mom assures me it's not bad
to get this kind of service)

-- but damn, haven't we all been there?
It could be worse
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My First Time - by DivineMsEmm - 06-13-2015, 08:10 AM
RE: My First Time - by Leanne - 06-13-2015, 08:14 AM
RE: My First Time - by DivineMsEmm - 06-13-2015, 11:08 AM
RE: My First Time - by Merrikay - 06-14-2015, 03:25 AM



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