06-13-2015, 06:07 AM
Powerful piece Shem:
I reread it several times. The two lovers entwined in the possibility of finding the promise land. and yet the promise land was inside them all along. The message in the poem was visually strong, and meaningful. almost like a heartfelt romance of Romeo and Juliet. The structure of the poem was steady and flowed evenly, It lured me into the depths of it.
Thank you for sharing
Forestdawn
I reread it several times. The two lovers entwined in the possibility of finding the promise land. and yet the promise land was inside them all along. The message in the poem was visually strong, and meaningful. almost like a heartfelt romance of Romeo and Juliet. The structure of the poem was steady and flowed evenly, It lured me into the depths of it.
Thank you for sharing
Forestdawn