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Never Have I Ever
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06-12-2015, 10:09 AM
Wow, I like the form, it reminds me of Ellen Hopkins. I feel like it could be a bit more poetic, as some mentioned previously, a bit more work on pulling together the flow. I don't want to say rhyme, since that's not always the goal. But reading it aloud, it sounds a little off. It's really interesting, and I like what you have going here.
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.
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Never Have I Ever - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 06-07-2015, 12:16 AM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by Grace - 06-08-2015, 12:50 AM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by Animal Riots Activist - 06-08-2015, 01:19 PM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by billy - 06-08-2015, 05:43 PM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by vtsai01 - 06-10-2015, 10:37 AM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by poppoetry - 06-11-2015, 07:13 PM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by Merrikay - 06-12-2015, 10:09 AM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 07-07-2015, 11:23 AM
RE: Never Have I Ever - by Julia.rose.q - 06-14-2015, 02:53 AM
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