06-08-2015, 01:50 PM
I enjoyed this. I almost want to see you change of to at for the King.
The only real critique I have though is that it seems like this title could be used for more.
I prefer short poems as a rule, but this might be one of the exceptions.
The only real critique I have though is that it seems like this title could be used for more.
I prefer short poems as a rule, but this might be one of the exceptions.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson