06-07-2015, 12:30 PM
Three name girl,
No, I see you are correct, while I knew about the tissue growth and the pain from endometriosis, I was unaware it could cause infertility and I thought it only happened at he time of the period: so the barren line confused me. My only question would be (and this out of simple curiosity) and I understand this poem is more geared towards female type persons, but do most woman have this depth of understanding of endometriosis? I do think your premiss is clever and maybe most of your target audience gets it. I also admire your bravery in taking on this subject with humor. Finally, I hope this character gets some treatment for this (I've read up on this since the last time), even though there is no cure. Seems to me that they should add MDMA to their list of drugs, it might help on the sex end of things, too bad it's illegal. Stupid government. Anyway, glad to have you on board. Look forward to future efforts.
Dale
No, I see you are correct, while I knew about the tissue growth and the pain from endometriosis, I was unaware it could cause infertility and I thought it only happened at he time of the period: so the barren line confused me. My only question would be (and this out of simple curiosity) and I understand this poem is more geared towards female type persons, but do most woman have this depth of understanding of endometriosis? I do think your premiss is clever and maybe most of your target audience gets it. I also admire your bravery in taking on this subject with humor. Finally, I hope this character gets some treatment for this (I've read up on this since the last time), even though there is no cure. Seems to me that they should add MDMA to their list of drugs, it might help on the sex end of things, too bad it's illegal. Stupid government. Anyway, glad to have you on board. Look forward to future efforts.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.