Have you ever shaken hands with a killer?
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Hello, I'm new here as well Smile

I really, really liked this poem. The rhyme is very good and flows very well. However, I do agree with what jbw1277 said. I would have liked some sort of little reveal at the end. We know that the speaker is in fact a killer themselves and although I think the point was to be playful and coy (despite the morbid subject matter) I'd still like to know a little more.

But honestly, very well done!
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RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by PsychicMice - 06-05-2015, 11:36 AM
RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by jbw1277 - 06-06-2015, 12:46 AM
RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by jasmine+clovers - 06-06-2015, 07:26 PM
RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by AeroSmitty - 07-10-2015, 08:24 AM



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