06-04-2015, 01:23 PM
I read this poem because I love Godzilla. It's given me new thoughts on how he applies to life.
My favorite part was "I see your lips move
in noiseless supplication,"
it was very scary but in a nice, creepily subtle way. It tied in nicely to the ending as well.
I'm not entirely sure what you are trying use Godzilla to represent specifically - the consequences of human negligence towards the earth or to other things? The consequences of exploiting energy sources? How we are dependent on things that destroy us?
You may want to clarify what the purpose of the poem is, if you want to, but it is okay to have the precise correlation of Godzilla with reality vague because it leaves the reader room to think for themselves. Godzilla could represent multiple things or several connected ideas. I honestly like how this poem made me think.
I hope you keep working with it!
-Rose
My favorite part was "I see your lips move
in noiseless supplication,"
it was very scary but in a nice, creepily subtle way. It tied in nicely to the ending as well.
I'm not entirely sure what you are trying use Godzilla to represent specifically - the consequences of human negligence towards the earth or to other things? The consequences of exploiting energy sources? How we are dependent on things that destroy us?
You may want to clarify what the purpose of the poem is, if you want to, but it is okay to have the precise correlation of Godzilla with reality vague because it leaves the reader room to think for themselves. Godzilla could represent multiple things or several connected ideas. I honestly like how this poem made me think.
I hope you keep working with it!
-Rose