05-31-2015, 11:54 PM
Hi Brownlie,
Interesting piece. Looks like an excerpt from a post-apocalyptic/futuristic/big brother-type of story like so many I read. Could you put us more into context so we can understand better what's going on? Also I'm curious of what you mean by "receive potential anima", your idea of anima, and also what you mean by "Haitian ghost". Lots of different concepts talked about here which are kind of blurry... and though it's written more like a story than a poem, I do like it.
Eager to read your response!
Alex
Interesting piece. Looks like an excerpt from a post-apocalyptic/futuristic/big brother-type of story like so many I read. Could you put us more into context so we can understand better what's going on? Also I'm curious of what you mean by "receive potential anima", your idea of anima, and also what you mean by "Haitian ghost". Lots of different concepts talked about here which are kind of blurry... and though it's written more like a story than a poem, I do like it.
Eager to read your response!
Alex
Some poetry - www.alexbex.net