Godzilla's Press Conference on Alternative Energy

[Tiger the Lion]

Hey Todd. Great title. Amazing what you can do under pressure. Some thoughts below:

I rose from the depths of your landfills, I think you could cut "the depths of"
the first blossom of this atomic age.
I ate steam trains, and with my tail I wonder if these 2 lines might read better rearranged:
smashed your factories;
      I ate steam trains and smashed 
      your factories with my tail;         or something like

still, you did not understand.
You fix your eyes on the ground,
recycling your waste. While I pulse "While...." doesn't need to be a new sentence. It's incomplete as is
like the sun with power beyond
fossil fuels. I am
the great lizard that walks
sometimes on you. something awkward here
I see your lips move 
in noiseless supplication,
hear my name—seconds late,
out of sync. It is to me you pray.

~~~

NaPM poem from a few years ago. I did some updates, and wondered if it was worth developing.

Always enjoy topics like this. Worth working on IMO.
Paul