A Routine Extravagance
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(05-23-2015, 02:01 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  
(05-23-2015, 01:03 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(05-23-2015, 05:08 AM)Wjames Wrote:  Thanks for the feedback guys, I've changed the title, and I think it better reflects the content of the poem now. I'm still not sure what punctuation (if any, even though I definitely pause) would work best at the end of the line.

When in doubt, put two dashes:

Like an old couple that always has sex on Thursday --
St. Patrick’s Day, New Years, and Birthdays
are limp obligations.
Or a really long one.

Yeah, well, if you're willing to go find an em dash that's fine.
The slang for em dash (lazy people's slang) is two hyphens. Smile
                                                                                                                                all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?
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Messages In This Thread
A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-10-2015, 01:57 PM
RE: A Planned Extravagence - by RiverNotch - 05-11-2015, 01:36 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagence - by just mercedes - 05-11-2015, 02:44 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagence - by Wjames - 05-11-2015, 02:56 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagance - by Mark101 - 05-11-2015, 05:17 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagance - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 08:14 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-16-2015, 01:27 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagance - by Airlocke - 05-20-2015, 02:56 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-20-2015, 09:24 AM
RE: A Planned Extravagance - by crow - 05-21-2015, 10:02 PM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-23-2015, 05:08 AM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2015, 01:03 PM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by RiverNotch - 05-23-2015, 02:01 PM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-24-2015, 07:56 AM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by RiverNotch - 05-25-2015, 05:58 PM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-25-2015, 06:37 PM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-26-2015, 09:07 AM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by billy - 05-26-2015, 12:41 PM
RE: A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-26-2015, 12:55 PM



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