05-24-2015, 07:56 AM
(05-23-2015, 02:01 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:(05-23-2015, 01:03 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:Or a really long one.(05-23-2015, 05:08 AM)Wjames Wrote: Thanks for the feedback guys, I've changed the title, and I think it better reflects the content of the poem now. I'm still not sure what punctuation (if any, even though I definitely pause) would work best at the end of the line.
When in doubt, put two dashes:
Like an old couple that always has sex on Thursday --
St. Patrick’s Day, New Years, and Birthdays
are limp obligations.
Yeah, well, if you're willing to go find an em dash that's fine.
The slang for em dash (lazy people's slang) is two hyphens.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

