05-23-2015, 01:03 PM
(05-23-2015, 05:08 AM)Wjames Wrote: Thanks for the feedback guys, I've changed the title, and I think it better reflects the content of the poem now. I'm still not sure what punctuation (if any, even though I definitely pause) would work best at the end of the line.
When in doubt, put two dashes:
Like an old couple that always has sex on Thursday --
St. Patrick’s Day, New Years, and Birthdays
are limp obligations.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions