A Routine Extravagance

A Routine Extravagance

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05-23-2015, 05:08 AM

Thanks for the feedback guys, I've changed the title, and I think it better reflects the content of the poem now. I'm still not sure what punctuation (if any, even though I definitely pause) would work best at the end of the line.

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A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-10-2015, 01:57 PM

RE: A Planned Extravagence - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 05-11-2015, 01:26 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagence - by RiverNotch - 05-11-2015, 01:36 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagence - by just mercedes - 05-11-2015, 02:44 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagence - by Wjames - 05-11-2015, 02:56 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagance - by Mark101 - 05-11-2015, 05:17 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagance - by ellajam - 05-11-2015, 08:14 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-16-2015, 01:27 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagance - by Airlocke - 05-20-2015, 02:56 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-20-2015, 09:24 AM

RE: A Planned Extravagance - by crow - 05-21-2015, 10:02 PM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-23-2015, 05:08 AM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2015, 01:03 PM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by RiverNotch - 05-23-2015, 02:01 PM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-24-2015, 07:56 AM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by RiverNotch - 05-25-2015, 05:58 PM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by rayheinrich - 05-25-2015, 06:37 PM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-26-2015, 09:07 AM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by billy - 05-26-2015, 12:41 PM

RE: A Routine Extravagance - by Wjames - 05-26-2015, 12:55 PM

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