05-16-2015, 01:27 AM
Thanks for reading guys.
Yes, I do think I could make it a little bit clearer that the Thursday is separate from the holidays. I don't think a period would work after Thursday, as I don't think a simile can really carry over in to two sentences. I might just cut the comma after Thursday, or use some sort of colon to show that it isn't a part of the Holiday list.
Yes, I do think I could make it a little bit clearer that the Thursday is separate from the holidays. I don't think a period would work after Thursday, as I don't think a simile can really carry over in to two sentences. I might just cut the comma after Thursday, or use some sort of colon to show that it isn't a part of the Holiday list.