Mum’s Stained Glass by just mercedes

[billy]

i can't believe i missed this gem, i've just read the thread and the workshoping was excellent. dare i say the end result is nigh on perfect, there has to be something wrong with it of course though i'm damned if i can see where.

couplets 2,3, 5 and 6 are so rich. the third couple shows a wholesome picture consisting of much more than the sum of their parts. they exude happy and loving and sharing. loved it loved the poem. great choice todd.