05-11-2015, 08:14 AM
(05-10-2015, 01:57 PM)Wjames Wrote: Like an old couple that always has sex on Thursday,Yes, the comma after Thursday made me read it as the first in the list, they had sex on thursdays and holidays. A change in punctuation I think would improve this. And I'm not sure you need old, even younger couples find themselves caught only in obligation. But thanks for the read, I enjoyed it.
St. Patrick’s Day, New Years, and Birthdays
are limp obligations.
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