NaPM April 10 2015

[milo]

While I liked many of the poems and there were some standout lines with food courts in temples, milo's poem worked for me on a few levels. If I'm remembering properly around this day he was trying to explain in a critique how to develop something like a jar of delights (I could be wrong), but he went out and demonstrated what he meant in a lovely poem. There were other good works here, but that one sums up what I look for in a poem in style and economy. Wistful, haunting little piece.

I am surprised you remember but, yes, this was inspired by the line "jar of delight". I think there was something about comparing sunlight to a jar of delight.