05-05-2015, 08:56 AM
thanks so so much. as someone said i have done way too much poetry reading and i wrote a lot of prose so i guess it helped my poetry more than i realized, till i actually put it down.
anyways, i really appreciate your comments since i was afraid the whole "from the mountains" thing wouldn't work on the outside. it's nice to know at least that those who can relate, do (@bena).
any advice on how to make this more understandable to everyone? i feel like poverty in appalachia is a really big issue and that's what i was trying to write about here but i don't quite know how to do it. what with the whole first time poet thing. but it's super fun, and i've gotten great support and help, so i've been doing it like crazy since this.
thanks so much guys. this is infinitely more helpful than i expected. i really like poetry.
-ajax
anyways, i really appreciate your comments since i was afraid the whole "from the mountains" thing wouldn't work on the outside. it's nice to know at least that those who can relate, do (@bena).
any advice on how to make this more understandable to everyone? i feel like poverty in appalachia is a really big issue and that's what i was trying to write about here but i don't quite know how to do it. what with the whole first time poet thing. but it's super fun, and i've gotten great support and help, so i've been doing it like crazy since this.
thanks so much guys. this is infinitely more helpful than i expected. i really like poetry.
-ajax