Three Seasons
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Autumn breeze and sunset tease
Orange tones and broken leaves
Whitest white as fallen snow
Winter sleeps and nothing grows
Chriping birds and children's play
Spring sunrise and brand new days



At the top of every page: "GIVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING A POEM IN ANY OF THE WORKSHOPS". Yours, again, is missing. /mod
*cry cry* okay I did it :3
As you can't seem to understand that giving thoughtful critique to others is more of a benefit to you than to the site you may be better suited to a different site. Best of luck to you. /mod


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Three Seasons - by Cyferz - 05-05-2015, 02:09 AM
RE: Three Seasons - by Unaccoutable ignorance - 05-05-2015, 10:36 AM



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