05-01-2015, 02:28 AM
Here is my first small edit-
The night here shines in ghostly ways-
gray veils slither high,
cover up the city-
seize every street corner.
Amongst the cracked chants and shouts,
thieves' plays
and scattered hawkers,
Raval pleads for another day.
Its veins at some flat time
incessantly sputter,
one after another,
the Drab
tightly dragging their belongings,
or a brown cigarette,
they eternally cherish.
The night here shines in ghostly ways-
gray veils slither high,
cover up the city-
seize every street corner.
Amongst the cracked chants and shouts,
thieves' plays
and scattered hawkers,
Raval pleads for another day.
Its veins at some flat time
incessantly sputter,
one after another,
the Drab
tightly dragging their belongings,
or a brown cigarette,
they eternally cherish.
Some poetry - www.alexbex.net

