04-30-2015, 03:45 AM
RiverNotch,
Thank you for your critique and for the time you spent on it.
I guess the bottom line is that it IS a lyric for a song and not a poem.
I'm sorry it didn't work for you.
-Psyve
Thank you for your critique and for the time you spent on it.
I guess the bottom line is that it IS a lyric for a song and not a poem.
I'm sorry it didn't work for you.
-Psyve
