NaPM April 29 2015
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(04-29-2015, 12:15 PM)milo Wrote:  ...Topic 29: Write an "unreliable narrator" poem which is a poem in which the narrator is essentially lying or untrustworthy....

    WTF?  You grasped the scrapped bottom of a straw barrel for this one.    I feel abused.




(04-29-2015, 01:04 PM)just mercedes Wrote:  This casually structured wine
uses grapes plucked at random
in the searing heat of  midday
by withered crones, crushed
underfoot by certified
Mediterranean lepers
and aged in grubby plastic vats
for weeks at least. It is characterized
by perineum colour and sweaty foot
notes with a spicy semenal finish.
Ideal as an accompaniment to suicide.

casually structured - certified Mediterranean lepers - perineum colour - spicy semenal finish
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NaPM April 29 2015 - by milo - 04-29-2015, 12:15 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by billy - 04-29-2015, 12:22 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-29-2015, 01:04 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by rayheinrich - 04-29-2015, 06:16 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by bena - 04-29-2015, 10:13 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by Todd - 04-29-2015, 10:18 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by rayheinrich - 04-29-2015, 10:31 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by bena - 04-29-2015, 10:38 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by Todd - 04-29-2015, 11:06 PM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by RiverNotch - 04-30-2015, 12:11 AM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by ChristopherSea - 04-30-2015, 01:25 AM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by Erthona - 04-30-2015, 02:42 AM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by bena - 04-30-2015, 03:35 AM
RE: NaPM April 29 2015 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-30-2015, 09:12 AM



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