04-25-2015, 02:58 AM
I like the drag of "Yesterday's" more, and maybe an em dash or something instead of a comma. Otherwise, neat.
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Time Flies When You're Having Fun - by 71degrees - 04-23-2015, 03:43 AM
RE: Time Flies When You're Having Fun - by RiverNotch - 04-25-2015, 02:58 AM
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