NaPM April 23 2015
#11
(04-24-2015, 05:16 AM)bena Wrote:  as a foreword, I would like to say that there were much easier definitions or concepts I could have chosen, but I went for the challenge.  Don't judge me too harshly, this is a first attempt.



Villanelle

My hands are drenched in tepid red.
I clutch my sweaty pen in palms.
This paper cuts thoughts in my head.

Though rhyme and I have never wed,
I've never faced it with such qualms.
My hands are drenched in tepid red.

A hope keeps surging, though I've bled,
that words I spew might be a psalm.
This paper cuts thoughts in my head.

I don't remember what I've said,
the tickling wind, it seems to calm-
my hands are drenched in tepid red.

My heart's still drumming with great dread.
I'm looking for a cleansing balm.
My hands are drenched in tepid red.
This paper cuts thoughts in my head.
Oh, bena, I almost fainted when I saw the title next to your avatar. Big Grin Really nice job with it, nothing to be scared of after all.
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NaPM April 23 2015 - by milo - 04-23-2015, 12:58 PM
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RE: NaPM April 23 2015 - by bena - 04-24-2015, 05:16 AM
RE: NaPM April 23 2015 - by ellajam - 04-24-2015, 05:37 AM
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