04-24-2015, 05:37 AM
(04-24-2015, 05:16 AM)bena Wrote: as a foreword, I would like to say that there were much easier definitions or concepts I could have chosen, but I went for the challenge. Don't judge me too harshly, this is a first attempt.Oh, bena, I almost fainted when I saw the title next to your avatar.
Villanelle
My hands are drenched in tepid red.
I clutch my sweaty pen in palms.
This paper cuts thoughts in my head.
Though rhyme and I have never wed,
I've never faced it with such qualms.
My hands are drenched in tepid red.
A hope keeps surging, though I've bled,
that words I spew might be a psalm.
This paper cuts thoughts in my head.
I don't remember what I've said,
the tickling wind, it seems to calm-
my hands are drenched in tepid red.
My heart's still drumming with great dread.
I'm looking for a cleansing balm.
My hands are drenched in tepid red.
This paper cuts thoughts in my head.
Really nice job with it, nothing to be scared of after all.
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