04-17-2015, 02:51 AM
Thanks LorettaYoung, alphazero, and Erthona.
(04-14-2015, 05:04 PM)Erthona Wrote: If this is an "updated" version, then I fail to see why you did not attend to the errors related to the contraction. Taking care of things like this is the first step towards the difference between a poet and not (talent not withstanding).Yeah, I should have attended to the contractions... No excuses here. I did proof read for small errors like that, but somehow over looked them. Anyway, all of your small corrections make the poem read a lot smoother. I'm not sure why the band-aid image doesn't work, but I'll think on it more. This version of the poem was supposed to be clear, but I guess its not. I seem to always underestimate the distance between my thoughts and the reader. Im working on a new edit that will super clear. Thanks again all.