04-13-2015, 09:07 PM
Thnx for reading and replying tectak. I've corrected the grammar things you've mentioned. I still have to attend the "pedaling" error but I have to negotiate the best way to do that yet. Yeah, I have critiqued others, but more never hurts. Without explaining each stanza, the poem is about a friend who shot himself, and me wishing I could fix that. Its a heavy subject for me, and was difficult to write on. I was trying to not be too heavy handed. Ill keep working on it, thanks again.