Abandoned

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Original

I
Inside my house, the many walls,
all these things interrupting other things

Outside my house, the lines
of my poems, walking on them

II
I see something random
in the garden, nameless

Shoots of new tulips,
a cock-necked starling


Edit #1

I
Inside my house, lives,
geometric walls, interrupting
solids

Outside my house, walking
in the lines of my poems,
the humming of bees

II
Something random, growing
in the garden, the tap roots
of new tulips

one cock-necked starling, watching
from a garden post, murmuration
separation