Have you ever shaken hands with a killer?
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I really like the mood that went into this poem. I don't usually like rhyme with hard subjects, but the sort of carefree sound of the rhyme and the subject matter work in your favor here to provide contrast. I do really like the subject matter, as well. The idea is not so abstract as to be hard to grasp, but I've certainly never read a poem quite like this one. I can't think of anything off the top of my head to say bad about this piece, except that it could benefit from stronger word choice. I especially like the last stanza, very moving! great job.
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RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 04-06-2015, 05:25 AM
RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by PsychicMice - 06-05-2015, 11:36 AM
RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by jbw1277 - 06-06-2015, 12:46 AM
RE: Have you ever shaken hands with a killer? - by AeroSmitty - 07-10-2015, 08:24 AM



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