NaPM April 4 2015
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(04-05-2015, 11:00 AM)billy Wrote:  nice triolet milo
should it be [slips] in the penultimate refrain? i like that it doesn't feel forced.
good catch, billy.  fixed.
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NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-04-2015, 10:00 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2015, 12:25 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Todd - 04-04-2015, 12:46 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Todd - 04-04-2015, 01:05 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2015, 01:07 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-04-2015, 01:26 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by rayheinrich - 04-04-2015, 01:44 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2015, 01:50 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by billy - 04-04-2015, 04:51 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by rayheinrich - 04-05-2015, 02:07 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-04-2015, 05:58 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Keith - 04-04-2015, 06:52 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-04-2015, 07:04 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by cidermaid - 04-04-2015, 07:52 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by billy - 04-04-2015, 08:06 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by ellajam - 04-04-2015, 08:58 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Erthona - 04-05-2015, 07:16 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 04-05-2015, 10:02 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-05-2015, 10:30 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by billy - 04-05-2015, 11:00 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-05-2015, 11:03 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Harry Carlisle - 04-05-2015, 02:28 PM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by bena - 04-06-2015, 06:30 AM
RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Todd - 05-06-2015, 06:36 AM



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