NaPM April 4 2015

NaPM April 4 2015

milo

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04-05-2015, 11:03 AM

(04-05-2015, 11:00 AM)billy Wrote: nice triolet milo
should it be [slips] in the penultimate refrain? i like that it doesn't feel forced.

good catch, billy. fixed.

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NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-04-2015, 10:00 AM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2015, 12:25 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Todd - 04-04-2015, 12:46 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Todd - 04-04-2015, 01:05 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2015, 01:07 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-04-2015, 01:26 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2015, 01:50 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by billy - 04-04-2015, 04:51 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Keith - 04-04-2015, 06:52 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by billy - 04-04-2015, 08:06 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by ellajam - 04-04-2015, 08:58 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Erthona - 04-05-2015, 07:16 AM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-05-2015, 10:30 AM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by billy - 04-05-2015, 11:00 AM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by milo - 04-05-2015, 11:03 AM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Harry Carlisle - 04-05-2015, 02:28 PM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by bena - 04-06-2015, 06:30 AM

RE: NaPM April 4 2015 - by Todd - 05-06-2015, 06:36 AM

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